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Living Nature

Energy echoes
from stony
breasts.

Forested
belly lies
softly
breathing.

Pristine
pond,
sustainer
of life.



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  • Liquid memories
    October 27, 2007
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    thank you so much for entering. success to you in the contest.


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    October 27, 2007
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    wow the power this write holds is amazing.
    good luck with the contest.
    xx


  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 27, 2007
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    Powerful write, so touching, feels like I'm therelol
    Good luck in the contestlol