Take a look around, we're living in the slums,
But we won't complain, we'll take everything that comes.
Bottom feeders some may call us behind our very backs,
But at least we know our place and understand the facts.
Bottom feeders! Bottom feeders! Here we stand united,
Hold your hands for our hope has been ignited!
A contest entry
- Bottom Feeder by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended November 15, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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this is a funny prompt, love the humor, thanks for entering!
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G'day Rose
Interesting poem. I like the second last line
Best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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Thank you very much Amanada. Haha it was the funnest!
~Emily
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