A calming feeling
of an everlasting peace
Nothing but BLiss is in the mind
As I stare into the still painted calmness.
A Still feeling of nothingness
fills me up
With a slight touch of hope.
As the waiting of what will happen with this "Serenity" caress
keeps me lingering on to
discover a whole new level of heaven.
Author notes
Yea not what I was going for but close!
A contest entry
- picture prompt by Liquid memories.
575 points, ended November 8, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thank you for your caring words. success to you in this contest.
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this is a great take on the picture prompt.
I adore your usage of words.
Good luck & blessed be.
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Thanks!
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