I wait for you, think of you
while every waking moment of you
feeds my thoughts
I dream of your voice, picture your contentment
as your laughter fills me with satisfaction
I know
you’ll never love me
It goes through my mind when you shun me
For your alternate reality, your legal bondage
presides your existence
but I'll settle for your attention
your tender words
Nightly tears fall privately
when your virtual kisses fall silently on virtual lips
pressing my heart against emptiness
I picture your words as reality
realizing these pictures are words
words of seduction
phrases of compassion
with passion that sings to me
These feelings I hide within
for I know I am nothing
in your eyes, but amusement
a distraction
Still
I Fantasize
of your hazel pearls
Burning into my soul
Your lips lusciously, silently
Calling me, to be yours
So I wait for you
And think of you
Until the day
You will know
That I will always
wait for you
Author notes
Is it a secret if you know? Or can a secret be seen as a request?
In a list
A contest entry
- Secrets In Disguise by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
1145 points, ended November 15, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Looking for a Lover ( Men Only) by raingoddess.
525 points, ended November 1, 2007, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Teach me to LOVE by Jessi-desensytized.
500 points, ended December 21, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - LONG DISTANCE RELATIONSHIPS by Jeremy0826.
1600 points, ended January 31, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me if it was worthy
Comments
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This is such a great piece!
I really enjoyed reading it and I thank
you for taking the time to enter it into
my contest! I appreciate it and wish you
the best of luck with it here! Keep up the
wonderful work!
Jeremy0826 -
So proud of you my Son, The dynamic poet...Mom
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Thanks mom - this one came back to me
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dude this is sad!
I want happy love poems!!!
Wanting someone u can't have as of yet is not happy!! lol
anyways very good poem Thanks for your entry -
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Sorry - lol, should have read it better - thanks
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I can't believe I missed this one
I love the suspence in this piece, Keee
always a mystery...and message all in one.
Great job.
ephiphany
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why can't you love me all the time? JK thanks - I think you disappeared around that time. I was looking for U
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Mykee Don't Be So Mean~smile
The set up is emaculate against and the perfect backdrop for such vivid sentiments and yearnings...
I'm beyond taken with this write
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{He blushes and takes a deep breath} Thank you. It came to me like vagrant on the street. Unexpected and a little too close. I had to write it. I'm glad U enjoyed it. ~ Mykeee
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Wow! The raw emotion in this piece speaks volumes to me, my friend, and I can just swim in how breathtakingly beautiful this was. I didn't see any reason to call this unworthy, so, I guess that means that this is WAY worthy. Good job. I wish you all the best.
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Way worthy huh? LOL!! thank you I thought of alot of poets online that has close friends and wanted to express that feeling when they aren't online.
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Well, you most definitely did a good job of it. Good luck in the contest.
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Excellent
This is a beautiful write, you speak of longing for someone, like someone far away that you can not reach, you have done a great job, thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
raingoddess
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wow I love the rhthym as the words rhymes "you". I love the wy the flow was as you expressed how you feel through simplicity again. This was really good but I truely am inlove with the rhythm of the rhymes of "you"
beautiful
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Thank U Aurielle - I actually had the word "you" throughout the poem, but I thought it was a little much. But I'm glad you noticed it. I may need to rethink the repetitive word in a poem and see what it feels like. Thanks again my friend
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Excellent poem. I admire your way with words. They are very descriptive and creates wonderful images. They are words of seduction.
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Thank U - It felt right and it flowed easily.
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Oh my you really had an inspiration here. I could feel the need you have to talk with your friend..to connect. You have done and excellent piece for this contest...So proud of you my Son, The dynamic poet...Mom
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Thanks mom!! There are a few friends that I haven't connected with for a few days. I'm all (sniff, sniff) alone
Thanks again
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MyKeee, Absolutely sensational my friend, filled with your emotions and very sensual. It sent tingles down my spine and left many images floating around in my mind. This flowed straight to my heart and left me feeling warm and fuzzy inside. Even with the sadness it still shined with the beauty of your words. You have such a tender soul and express your inner self quite elegantly. I thank you for sharing this and wish you all the best in the contest with this golden piece that you penned. Keep that ink flowing. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce
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Thank you Joyce - makes me blush from your comments. it came to me in the middle of the night and went with it. a bit of sadness a bit of secrecy. A bit of I wish. So many people have this thought while on line so I wanted to show it as if it was reality.
thanks again my friend ~ mikeeee
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i love this and that picture describe us all on all poetry right at our laptops and desk tops you did a very great awesome job
juju
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