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The Lizard of DOOM

I will eat your face
If you get one inch closer
I am for more fierce
Than you will ever know, man
Your face will be mine, just watch

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My attempt at a tanka...

A contest entry

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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 26, 2007

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    Ahh and a fine tanka it is to Thanks so much for your entry and trying a new form
    Gaylene