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Lit Only By Starlight Flickers

swirling strokes
round rings

powerful peaks

delicious delights
dramatic and daring

sitting atop
looking out in the darkness
lit only by starlight flickers
sometimes
one can see more
than in the brightest of sunlight

 

winding wipes

billowing brushstrokes

 

exotic energy

 

delicious delights

dramatic and daring

 

 

 

 





 

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Inspired by VanGogh

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  • aboomer silver member
    February 1, 2008

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    You have painted a beautiful picture with your words. I especially like,
    'sitting atop
    looking out in the darkness
    lit only by starlight flickers
    sometimes
    one can see more
    than in the brightest of sunlight'....that is so deep and so true. Sitting in the dark looking at the sky, one can see so much more of themselves, and others, than in the clear light of day. Maybe because it's quiet enough to think and you are surrounded by a pure beauty not yet blurred with the realities of life....
    anyways....
    I really like this.
    well done.


  • willowprincess
    December 23, 2007

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    fantastic. great use of alliteration and repetition.
    i love this picture and you did a great job with it.


  • Ryno
    November 12, 2007

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    Betsy!!! I havent talked to you in forever!!

    I really liked this piece... lots of very vivid imagery and you painted the picture very well. I think the repitition also worked. Beautiful!


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    November 3, 2007

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    Excellent write based off of Starry Night. I like the repetition of the delicious delights lines. Thank you for entering the contest.


    whisper


  • lemonhead
    October 27, 2007

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    Yay Its greeat! i love that picture! you did a great job describing it!

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