You
I will never forget
my child
my baby
you are the thing that keeps me
going
even knowing you are gone
i stil listen
waiting to hear
your giggles
knowing that only God is blessed with that
I still wait to feel your hand
but only God is blessed with that
I know that you are there
yet your so far away
Letting Anna watch you play
Not knowing what i am going to say
that day
that i see you
But right now i know
you
I will never Forget
Author notes
This is all i could think of when it came to not forgetting or somthing forever. Anna was a child that my AP mother had still born and the baby that i am talking about i Lost as well having her Still born
~~*Remember Mezeker Mylove*~~
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- Never Forget, Never Let Go by trista.
450 points, ended November 30, 2007, 27 entries
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Having lost a child myself, I can really relate to this poem. You picked a wonderful "Never forget, never let go" subject to write about, and I can see how much this has touched Anna's mom as well. I loved the line, "you are the thing that keeps me going" because usually people think of keeping going for those people in their lives who are still alive. But what a wonderful thing to keep moving forward even for those who have gone before us.
I'm very sorry for your loss, but hope writing has helped you work through some of the grief, as it has done for me. Thank you so much for a heartfelt and personal entry, and good luck in the contest!
Best wishes,
~J.
Pssstt...you may want to double check this for a couple of typos.
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This must be so touching to the heart and soul of anyone who has lost a child. I don't know how you come to terms with that, it is the wrong way round of life. Such sweet words.
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OMG...Im in tears here..You rememebered my Anna...
Oh 
i know my precious girl is watching yours, i know it..this was well penned honey
Love you
Mum
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