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Mahalo welcome to Poetic Tash New AP Sister

 

 

Mauii, Hawaii flows lovely and exotic.

Vast  arrays  of ancient holy hues,

sunsets of hypnotic horizons,

aroma of orchid’s in bloom.

Just like the poems of AP New Sister,

Poetic Tash.

 

As you read her poetic beauty ,

feel the cool blue saltwater foam

tenderly,

she leads you mysteriously,

delicately,

To  shark infested bloody waters,

Whispering with her imagery,

Breathe dear one Breathe.

 

We dive into her poetic flavors

Freedom in her writes, bold fearless

Young woman,

Who hides pearls in her  poems.

Listen to her melodies, the siren’s soft call,

pirates gold, and just like me,

You’ll be in awe,

 like the first time you

Discovered the treasures of Mauii.

 

It would be an honor to have you as a Poetic

Sister Tash.

 

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Welcome to the Family Poetic Tash!

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gift to my new AP SIS...she is a must read...you will brag you read her first on Allpoetry.com

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  • nothinghere silver member
    November 8, 2007

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    This is so beautiful, tis nice to know someone thinks of another in such glowing terms.. well done on a great write

    Karen


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    October 30, 2007
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    awe everyone is so sweet i had to comment again, thank you thank you thank you....so lovely

  • Denierim
    October 30, 2007

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    This is a beautiful write. I love the imagery; I could almost smell the salt water and now I really want to get to a beach again... I miss the sea living in inner land... sigh

    Buuuut to the poem itself! This is a beautiful one and it shoes you really like her writes, taking all the words you chose there. You made me want to check out some of her works and that's one of the best things about these writes dedicated to other people. And they really show the friendship there between the words. That's what makes poems like this beautiful!


  • LadyShiva
    October 30, 2007
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    This was so beautifuly written!! I have had the honor of reading her poetry and you have spoken the truth in every line! You are an amazing poet too! This was simply breath taking, the imagery just had me floating along it's sweet beauty from the first line to the last! Well Done!!


  • sinnocence
    October 30, 2007
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    wow, this is so lovely... a beautiful poem for another beautiful poetess. <3 Jojo

  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    October 30, 2007

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    awww Tash must be thrilled, isn't she??? She is the best sister you can have...
    Great tribute to honnor her....

    XXJeannette
    btw...I am her Twinnie, nice to meat you


  • seamaiden
    October 30, 2007

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    I have been lucky enough to read her work and I was lucky enough to read this gem you wrote for Tash. This is a lovely tribute you have written for her and it is filled with beautiful imagery. This particular verse caught my attention the most.
    We dive into her poetic flavors

    Freedom in her writes, bold fearless
    Young woman,
    Who hides pearls in her poems.
    Listen to her melodies, the siren’s soft call,
    pirates gold, and just like me,
    You’ll be in awe,
    like the first time you
    Discovered the treasures of Mauii.

    Thank you for this wonderful poem. I love the background you used too. Keep writing poet. seamaiden ♥


  • Hekate gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    This was really sweet. I hope that the two of you enjoy your new found relationship together as brother and sister. No fighting lol j/k

  • gcpirelli
    October 30, 2007

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    Wow

    Amazing especially the second paragraph, the rythm of the entire poem is fantastic and really creates an atmosphere. I aspire to write such emotive, descriptive words.
    Calming and thought provoking.
    Gets my thumbs up.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Day Star
    October 30, 2007
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    Excellent write

    Wow, you have captured the imagery of a beautiful place.


  • High Flyer
    October 30, 2007

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    Oh, I definitely read her poetry and enter her contests. She has a great gift and is using it very wisely as are you. You wrote this poem with outstanding achievement in emotions, imagery, and beauty. Great job!!

    . Rewarded 4


  • Grimoire
    October 30, 2007
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    Welcome to the Family indeed, nicely written and I have been to Maui it is indeed beautiful!!!

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    October 29, 2007

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    This is such a sweet poem with a beautiful
    background here! Kind of takes me back home
    when I look at it. Wonderful work here and
    thanks a lot for sending it my way! Keep up
    the wonderful work here!




    Jeremy0826

  • Ephiphany gold member
    October 27, 2007

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    awwww

    She's my sissy too
    She is loved by so many, thanks for sharing your heart with her as well
    Lovely write, and gorgeous background.


    Ephiphany


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    October 27, 2007

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    you wrote me a poem????
    thank you so much!!! you're so sweet it's beautiful!
    amazing write...even if it weren't for me
    i love these lines...

    "We dive into her poetic flavors
    Freedom in her writes, bold fearless
    Young woman,
    Who hides pearls in her poems."

    Thank you for such an amazing, beautiful welcome!

    Tasha

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