a dream
crawling into your mind
wading through memories
vivid, real, entwined
a wish
sharing your feelings
thoughts swimming
pools of life's dealings
a reality
losing myself
fiction, alone, sinking
down the delph
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Wow! great job!
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youre back. and amazing. i dont even have critique. hope all has been well.
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Wow!!
This is one Powerful piece You have penned and certainly tugs at the heartstrings
Wish You only Happiness and
if You ever need to talk;
I am here~ Happy to see You back
Thank You for sharing this and I imagine
there are others who can relate
It takes Strength to pen emotion~~~
Best wishes to You Sweet Soul
Many blessings too
and much love~Desire~*~
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thanks! you're too sweet~ so glad to be back !! Betsy
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This is sad and desolate...very well expressed and emotional. I haven't heard from you in such a long time. I hope you are o.k.! I miss you!
Love~
Az
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I'm ok ! missing you too and just sent you a message !!
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