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Miscarriage

I picked a rose for you
From a garden in the city
A budding flower
Red at the stem and at the petal

Planted in flesh
Watered with blood
The flesh of my life
The blood of my love

Blood drained from my body
Pulled from my heart
Pumped into the rose
Through the root

From the day the seed was planted
I started to die
And willingly I did
Because I died for you

Now I am without more blood to bleed
Although the flower is not yet in bloom
I believe that you will love it the way I love you
And with your love, it will grow old

The rose for you
I offer with the last of my strength
For once you clip it
And take it in your arms
I will bleed dry
And it will be all that I made in life
The thing that I made in my death

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 27, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    G'day Arch

    Wow! What a stunning and beautifully tragic poem!

    The imagery created in this is mind-blowing ... excellent poem

    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Amanda


  • darkheart76
    October 26, 2007
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    wow

    loved


    • Arch
      October 26, 2007
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      really? you can't imagine how happy that makes me feel.