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Coma of Dying Roses

Suffocating; the sweet scent of roses.
Too intoxicating to think too much.
The strong arms of the Somebody who claimed me for his own;
Behind the embroided mask of lies,the Nobody poses.
And yet,fallen into the maze he made
I'm trapped upon all his proposes.


Into the coma,the Assasin is too far behind;
Inside the bed of roses,here's where I'll lie.


No longer at arms-length;
It's too far,he'll never be reached.
It's all my fault,why couldn't I see?
Only starving on the power of lust and greed.
From the bottom of my fixated heart;
Give me the power to save the man my emotions sought.


Into the coma,the dying roses plead;
Even through my eyes,that man will never be freed.

Author notes

Another poem based off the couple Marluxia and Zexion from Kingdom Hearts.
Gods I love this pairing XD (I have Thunder And Rayne to thank mostly though!)

This is through Zexion's eyes. Marly's been acting like a "corpse on wheels" and Zexy has to suffer. Tough love maybe?

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  • Rayn
    October 27, 2007

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    Tough love, yes much? Of course, but maybe that's all that Marly needs, hmmm? Who knows, but we'll find out, right?

    Great write and awesome topic! You rock, Fenny!


    • Tekno Suicide
      October 27, 2007
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      He needs some uber tough love. And of course we'll find out!

      Thanks Rain! :]


  • Androgyneric
    October 26, 2007
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    I absolutely LOVE this! Amazing!