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They have destroyed it--
those men with their wrecker's ball
have levelled my neighbourhood.

Old houses are eyesores--
those who oppose are Luddites,
a thorn in the city's side.

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    November 12, 2007
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    Excellent! Well done on this here form. loved the contents. Congrats on the trophy


  • Mykeee
    October 28, 2007
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    Excellent - This is how I see a SEDOKA should be. Nice perspective