Tired.
Sink to the floor.
Hands over my eyes...
Tears slip through.
The ache...
Has turned to...
Sharpe stabs of guilt.
There's nothing left.
No one is there.
No one to hold.
No one to love and cherish
No one to save me.
Gutwrenching screams escape me.
Trying to free the pain inside.
But it only consumes me further.
Pulling me farther down.
Down into this damn pit of dispair.
I want it to let go.
To disappear.
I want to laugh.
To smile.
But there's no love....
There's no hope...
There's no where to go...
And as always...
There's no one there.
I'm falling..
No one can catch me.
No one even tries.
Am I just that meaningless?
Leans head against the wall...
And lets the tears come...
There's no use in careing enough to stop them......
Author notes
**stares into space**
whatever...comment on what you think it's about I guess
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This is beautiful again, I think you deserve the title the poet of emotion.For you describe so eloquently your emotions.
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Justin3
I do seem to use my complete emotions for my writeing theme...Thanks again Love for your gift of words and for takeing the time to read my soul...**smiles warmly**
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Like it.
Keep it up, go girl!
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Sean
**laughs** I will babe...and thank you!!!
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Another deep and raw piece from you.
From all that I have read from you so far,
I hope that it all isn't true. What a terrible
feeling to go through life knowing that no one
in your life cares for you or will be there to
catch you when you fall. Being alone in this
world is something that we all fear. We need
that special hand to hold throughout our days
and that easing smile from the one that we
love, to reassure us that everything will be
alright. I hope that you find the serenity
and tranquility that you seek for yourself.
I wish you all the best in life and hope that
things turn around for you very soon!
Jeremy0826
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Jeremy
Thank you for taking the time to read my writes...I love it when you comment on them becuz you really sit there and read them. And it was an emotional moment when I wrote this one. One of those dark hopeless days that we all have every so often. ((more often than not these days)) But I smacked myself for it...lol..I always have my son's hand to hold...and though he is still quite young...he keeps me going...picks me up without ever knowing it...so thank you...your comment was what made me realize it...**hugs** -
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You are very welcome my friend, it's my pleasure!
Take care!
Jeremy0826
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Great poem hun really deep and dark. Love the imagery and word choice they word so well together.
" Gut wrenching screams escape me"
Gives the impression that you are holding back as much as you can but everything is coming out regardless and you are powerless to stop it. I can feel your pain as i read the words of the page and i can imagine he pain you felt as you wrote it. Very intense and gripping piece. Stay well and keep penning my dear sister.
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little marshmallow
Thanks hun....I don't know waht to say about this poem really...I'm dark and emotionally drained these days...sorry it took so long for me to reply to your comment...I always apreciate your words!! **hugs**
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so much raw emotion....
Very intense piece, irishmidnight! Every tear trickled off the page. Very deep!
Don
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Knight70
**hugs** you always see so much into it that no one else does...Thank you for that...you mean so much to me as a friend...I don't know what I'd do without you!!!!
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this is a very intense piece of work i enjoyed it and the feeling behind it.
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foryourowngood
**smiles** Tank you!!!! It's been awile since ive heard from you. I'll have to catch up on yours as well my dear!!!
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Beautiful....so deep...and I remember feeling like this one time...just perfect.
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Brownsugarnilekat
**grins ** glad it was one that you could compare a part of your life too...those always seem to mean the most
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Powerful write with strong emotion. There seemed to be a lot of pain in this piece. I hope you're okay. Feel better.
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Arzab
**hugs tight** thanks for everything
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Wow honey... such pain...
I'm sorry, and I hope you know I'm here for you. Just remember that. But it is another great poem, my dear. Your pain hits me to the core... I know exactly how you feel in this.
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owch... a lot of pain there... a lot of hurt, I think I know how you're feeling, after the breakup I've just had.. it hurts so much... xxxx
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anguas-confusion
I just went through a breakup myself...but it's feeling more like a divorce...and the friends I thought I once trusted...have left me high and dry. I hate people who tell you that they'd be there no matter what...and the one time in your life that you really need them there...they turn their backs. They shoot you down to nothing!!! **hugs you** I just gotta keep going I guess...and I hope you're ok as well...And I want you to know...that If you need anyone to talk to i'm here as well ok? Thanks for being understanding
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