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substance[induced]

cotton-filled mouth
and cotton-lined lips
exchanging kisses in the dim of the night

he's going over every inch of my neck
thoughts impaired by the bittersweetness
of a little girl named Mary Jane.

Hands exploring familar places
and some not so much.
grinding, thrusting-baby, don't stop.

I know it's wrong
ntohing about this is right.
Dear God-it's so wrong
but man oh man
it feels so damn right.

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mid-late August.

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  • velveteen
    November 13, 2007

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    mmmm, I really really like this. :]

    do I know about this event? ;]

    anyway, it was very sexy, but kinda innocent at the same time... I likey much.


  • lingonberries
    November 9, 2007

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    Stuff that feels so great and on the same time so wrong... it's never easy... You accidently switched the o and the t in nothing. Take care!