You,
Stare me in the eyes.
Tell me you'd do anything for me.
Promise me the world.
Hold my hand when I cry.
But I'm no FOOL!!
You're a pit of lies...
All of you.
I know that every-time I Turn my back,
You stab me.
You laugh.
And It would never matter,
If it wasn't for my son.
But It matters,
Because his life matters..
What have I done to deserve this betrayal?
When have I let you down?
Or left you out in the cold?
When have I abandoned you?
Or put myself before you?
Never....
I've let go of everything I have,
For you
I've sacrificed my pride,
And friendships...
My family...
To give you what you have now...
All for what?
For the blood now on my hands?
For the pain in my heart?
For the life my son is going to have to suffer through?
Thank you
For being my fool.
Always the fool
Author notes
This one is for everyone that screwed me over and didn't give it a seconds thought. So whatever...I'm done...I hurt too much right now to ask for much more than that.
It's short...not really worth anything
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The pain of betrayal is great!
The wounds run deep !
This is so raw and so real-
I feel you!
~Pastel
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Very straight-forward and powerful.. emotional and true.. I have my thoughts on people in general, but that doesn't matter now. i've been betrayed before and promised a lie.. sometimes the pain can be unbearable and im sorry you have to feel that. *hugz* but Good write.. and keep writing
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Morbidecilpse66
I knew you'd be one of the few to completely understand this peice...And thank you for commenting love...**hugs**
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You know it sucks when we have to withstand such pain, I could feel the heat coming off the poem as I read it you left a lot of energy in there. This is a very good piece.
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foryourowngood
Thank you!! It was a heated poem for sure...and thanks for taking the time to read it and comment...it means alot to me
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I'm so sorry for what you're going through.
This tore me up, Lizz. Some people just need to get their heads screwed on right, and think about what's really important. You obviously see it, so why can't they? Hugs go out to you....
Don
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Knight70
I didn't mean to upset you with this one...But its true...I'm tired of everything right now it seems...Thanks for being here Don...**hugs back**
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This is a very powerful write you have penned here, Lizz. It makes me think of how sometimes some people in our lives may say one thing, but then won't do what they say when the time comes, like empty promises. You expressed your emotions in this poem very well. I'm sorry you're hurting. I hope you feel better. Take care.
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Arzab
Youre are a great friend **hugs** thank you for the understanding!!! You saw right through this poem rather well **grins** I'm working on getting myself back up to par...**smiles shyly** But thanks again...it helps knowing someone out there gives a crap.
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Another amazing poem, sweetie. I know exactly what you're meaning by this, and I'm sorry for all the pain you're going through. It really hurts me to see you hurting, and this poem... wow. You are such an amazing poet, able to write your feelings out so well. Keep your chin up babe, I'm here for you.
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i'm sorry your hurting hunni... I wish I could help, such a passionate poem. I'm around if you'd like to talk, I'm a good listener... xx
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anguas-confusion
Thanks babe...I just don't know waht to say just now...I don't know what to do...But it makes it a lil better knowing someone out tehre cares...**hugs** thanks
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