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My Gothic Romeo

I'm burning, burning were I stand,
The blood of you on both my hands,
I love you so, but OH the pain,
It burns so bad, I'm going insane,
The bites you made that flow with blood,
It runs so red into a flood,
Fighting, fighting, it will pass,
You tell me that it will not last,
Oh, my love we'll always be,
Together, forever, you and me,
And we'll dance with eachother by the full moon's glow,
You are mine, my Gothic Romeo.

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  • lonelyvampireboy666
    November 3, 2007
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    bravo a brilliant write
    u pieced the words together perfectly
    keep up the good work


  • shadow of the void
    October 30, 2007

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    darkly beautiful is an under statement. this is a poem that has a almost sinster pull to it. its perfect.


  • Artemis Gem
    October 26, 2007

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    And we'll dance with eachother by the full moon's glow,
    You are mine, my Gothic Romeo.


    darkly beautiful. well done

    nice background