Heaven,
tilts on axis
thrown earthwards,
in a downward spiral;
Guardians swoop ;
The devil's advocates
race to meet the fallen,
in winged melee` ;
Battlefield whispers ,
despair,
within an angelic poise.
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A contest entry
- Make me want MORE by Suzanne Dia.
1000 points, ended October 30, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well penned!
As usual with you!
Write on!
*PEACE*
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Thank you sweetie, I appreciate your support
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Yes the unfaithful will fall among the battlefield and the devil's advocates will be racing to capture their souls in hell. Thank you for sharing this with me and making me want more of this treat. I wish you the best in the contest and god bless...
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Thank you Darryl for your kindness
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WOW!
I wrote something like this recently but due to a technical error on the site it got deleted or something, very very very inspiring write a heck of a lot better then what I had attempted to write!
Best of luck and well done!
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Thanks Pink, sorry you lost your poem
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