A barren breeze sighs to rubble’s covers,
mounding mind in windy wallows,
bedding last night's conversation,
through satin memories of what did flow
inside my renovation's kiss,
as sensual slide, to seasonal pride,
descending in adoration,
with such a blur,
spurring this prodding pump to pant,
pushing Natural flow
in orgasmic misconceptions
of superior erections, chasing rainbow;
where we did look into our eyes,
discovering the cataracts of time
slanting rock,
to roll in grain
gathering momentum’s children, whining,
within the guise of billowing clouds,
precipitating voice in canon shots,
and crippled fingers.
Author notes
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"Sehnsuchtige Erwartung" by Micha & Birgit
A contest entry
- SHADOWS OF DECLIVITY....PHRASE PROMPT 24HR....13/20 by Blue Rew.
1470 points, ended October 28, 2007, 4 entries
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There is so much here to gather, but all seems to relate to the visual as well as the phrase prompt.
I was especially drawn to "bedding last night conversation, through satin memories of what did flow"
The whole verse seems to echo regret as lustful relationship wakes up to stare upon reality and longevity. Wonderful take on the "downfall" theme.
PS-night should have an apostrophe s added
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