Thoughts of you and our night of passion linger in my head
Drifting from daydream to consciousness
Unaware of my surrounds and the people around move mindlessly like drones
I smile because I can feel your touch on the small of my back
I giggle because I feel the moisture of your tongue on the lobe of my ear
I snap back to reality and wish I had not because
I had just begun to feel your warm embrace shield me from the world
So I succumb to my inner thoughts of you left over from the night before
And relive the arch you put in my back followed by the kisses that trailed my inner thigh
Relishing in look of ecstasy I see in your eyes delighted that I am the reason it is there
Aroused by your zealous behavior making my aching body desire you to no end
I came to the conclusion that
It was not real
That you had me
Spell bound
Again
A contest entry
- Anything Goes by vampireprincess.
315 points, ended June 25, 2008, 59 entries
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I like this so much! This is fantastic! I think it is dark, and spooky in that it is so real kind of way. This is great! Good job, I think this is beautifully written!
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Interesting... I really like it. This is heart breaking. I hope this was not written about a real experience... nobody deserves to be treated that way. I really liked it. Thanks for entering and good luck
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