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Moonlight dancer

I feel so free
As the moonlight gleams
I have all what I need
As much as I dream

The moonlight gleams all on my dreams
The moonlight all on me as I dance and dance
As it knows I need to be seen.

Author notes

Just a short poem.that I written at the top of my head.

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    October 27, 2007
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    Great poem Good Luck In the Contest


  • star girl
    October 26, 2007
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    Short but good.I like the rhythm in it.Did a nice job.Nicely written.I love it!


  • ginger snap
    October 26, 2007
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    I like it.Like the rhyme.You did a nice job on this one.Keep up the good work.