Binding your arms behind you
Your breasts presented tightly
Tying your legs securely in place
I need you held just rightly
I'll be using your body the way that I chose
Your job to enjoy it whatever
All of your life you'll be bound in some way
Since you are my slave forever.
I'll keep you bound just as I please
Each part of you tightly roped
I wanted to bind you close to my heart
And you loved me just as I hoped
You sound like a tune on a great violin
With the finest master playing
Your body is open for hands that will stray
And you'll find that my hands are straying
Author notes
Re-written in a more normal form, I think it is rather better.
Sorry Chantell it's 16 lines. It started out in quite an odd form so I continued, not sure if I like it.
A contest entry
- Adults only (sorry! haven't had one of these for a while now) by Tattboyspet.
800 points, ended October 30, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please comment below. Spelling or rhyming or scanning corrections welcome.
Comments
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slave and master....exactly what i love!!
(i wanna be a slave!!!! lol)
Great write!
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yeah - I agree with Jen ... the message was fantastic, but the form was a bit distracting for me ~shrug~
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You are actually far too kind. The form is rubbish!
I shall look at re-writing it after work today.
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i loved the message that your sending though not sure about the form... i wish you all the best in the contest
cheers
Jen
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