when your eyes are red from crying
and you think that you can fly
you hate him and you miss him
but you cant bear to say good bye
you need to sleep forever
razors give you no such luck
an angel in there dying
but he doesnt give a fuck
you sold your soul to break the skin
and suicides the only way
you hate this world now that hes gone
you want to die today
god wants you to go back to him
but your wings were never there
well fuck you jesus christ my lord
you made love so unfair
hope is just a call away
but you sit and wait for death
its 2 am your pulse is gone
you've just taken your last breath
at last when its all over
hes on his knees in a pool of you
your body drained your life is gone
and now he loves you too
© michelle valley 2004
A contest entry
- The Magical Word of F*ck :) by ultimate beluga.
450 points, ended November 14, 2007, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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What a great entry in the contest
best of luck to you
Delila
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ohh wow!
not the storngest rhyme ever but strong enough not to be an issue..
this is great, its not an original theme but your poem made it all so sharp and vivid. the ending, the "now he loves you too" line, was amazing. so strong. and that your "fuck you" moment was to jesus christ... definitely added emphasis!
thanks heaps for entering!
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