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Autumn Angst

leaves rain down
from the dark sky above
red, yellow, orange
the color of flames
like the fire
ever burning in my head

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  • takemypainaway
    January 21, 2008
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    "leaves rain down
    from the dark sky above
    red, yellow, orange
    the color of flames
    like the fire
    ever burning in my head"

    such short amazing lines..
    --kat


  • leander Moderators member
    December 4, 2007
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    I like the referance of autumn to the fir that's burning inside of you that's really well done!
    Thank you for entering this contest, I wish you the best of luck!
    Leander


  • CapturedMoon
    October 26, 2007
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    Love, love, love.
    This is great.

    So short.
    And it has great imagery.