It’s been weeks since I last seen you
All I could do was dream of the day we’ll meet again
so it was no surprise when we met up again that went at it like animals.
Not caring who see I wanted you and wanted you bad
To feel you thrusting deep inside of me
I’d give anything to be with you again
We sneak off around back in the alley
Something about the excitement of what we was about to do had my panties soak and wet
I took your hand and directed you to my sweet essence
You slip your fingers into my hot wet pussy
One finger than you added another
Soft moan I exhale damn this feel so good
I leaned against the brick wall because my knees are getting weak
I close my eyes as your tongue starts to explore my body
My ear, neck, chest, stomach past my torso
Your tongue finds its way to my wet swollen lips
You start to Suck, lick and bite my clitoris
This shit is driving me crazy
I try to hold on to the wall but I can’t
My body becoming weak
My temperature rising
My breathing deeper and I start to cumBy: Levesta
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A contest entry
- ~* Hands On Healing *~ by Desire.
925 points, ended November 10, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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baby your sister can't be reading this now honey i just buried mrs bedroom boss now you trying to bring her from the grave i like this here oh my its nasty just how i prefer it
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than I don't think You should read any more of your lil sis poem lol well not until the other you come back love ya
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Yes
You write with the wisdom of a sex deity and you know your way around the human body, hitting all the right spots in stride. Keep doing your thang baby.
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You describe very well and make it so erotic, pussy cat!
Galaxy2
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Very graphic imagery and great progression of events leading to the inevitable. Spelling could be better but a damn fine read
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry in our Group contest:
Back Aganist the wall
Love the images You have brought forth and the energy heightened from within which could be felt throughout the entire piece
Boiling connection between the two parties
Like I mentioned in another contest entry...
Felt like I intruded or like a peeping Tom but I did not bring a cam to record so all good
Love the line:
One finger than you added another
Oh My
I'm not a real stickler on spelling for I for I miss a letter here and there so I don't count off for it...but I know I like to know or be told if something is noticed
The line:
Something about the excitement of what we was about to do had my panties soak and wet
...wanted to run this by You...
regarding the panties...
panties soaked and wet or
panties soaking wet
just something to think about...
My ear, neck, chest, stomach, past my taros...
did You mean torso...past my torso..
(just had to ask)
and the line: my tempter rising...
I thought You meant temperature there...
but wanted to run by You
This line:
I close my eyes as your tongue start to explore my body
wanted to run this by You...
I close my eyes as your tongue starts to explore my body...
lastly...the tile...I thought You meant...
Back Against the Wall...
but I understood Your words...No worries there
Wonderful piece!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Keep that quill dancing
Judging will be done shortly~~
Best wishes to You
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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this was cool mommy you gettin the sheets wet up in this mutha you know what i am sayin stay up
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hey good luck in the contest
this is a really great write
I like how you said *We sneak off around back in the alley* very dark and sexual spot
well for me ha
*high five* on this one though
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thank you love
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weakness in ecstacy!
I try to hold on to the wall but I can’t
My body becoming weak
My tempter rising
My breathing deeper and I start to cum " A splendid visual fantasy and it remains in mind for so long. It is like a dream ,sweet Vee!
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this was a really great poem, very dark and seductive...you really are a cool poet, and VERY good at erotic stuff...good luck in the contest
GREAT PIC!!
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