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Grr..

You can spit in my face,
you can try and break me.
  But im already broken.
So go on, Beat me.

Im not worthy of life and its joys.

Why should i try?
Why should i Cry?

Just bury me, i can go lower.
Just leave me to my devices.

But one day, I'll fight back.

Author notes

yea, I was gaybashed and felt pretty crappy.. and this is the end result.

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  • Remember3
    November 27, 2007

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    I can feel the anger. I love the last line.
    "But one day, I'll fight back"...
    so awesome.
    Most people are close minded and its their fault...they're idiots.


  • mourningmonday
    October 28, 2007
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    screw the bashers shannon. they just don't understand.

    and i liked the poem. good feeling.