AS a tear rolls down my face,
I lose the fear.
The fear of losing you.
I lose the fear of you leaving me.
I do not let a tear fall.
Fall no more because of the fear.
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Short, yet strong in the points that you make. Somehow, I feel like it's unfinished though. And after some thinking, I realized that the last paragraph is connected to the first in portraying your emotions, a strong connection. Keep it up!
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Awesome
I love this poem!
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Full of meaning this one. Quite deep too. You lose the fear of losing a loved one so no more tears. Fear can hold people back in so many ways. You lose it you can take on the world. Very well-written.
Love
Wayne Leon
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short but meaningful, sweet write doll
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nice short but sweet. Like the imagery 2
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dmoney09
this is unique
i enjoy poems that arent the same as my own
keep writing to you
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i love this!!
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very nice I like it
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