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Betrayal 1

I met you on the crossroads
Of a silent, whispering despair
Secrets exchanged were added to the many skeletons in the closet
Of all the lies, this one was most unfair

You touched the Ying that only my Yang knows
Guilty pleasures conflicted my mind
And my body betrayed me as my eyes closed
Only your love can save me this time

Why? Why must I continue to touch you
Why must I continue to want to feel you?
Why is the essence of what is his wanting to be yours?
I wonder if he's doing the same thing too

In the midst of my betrayal, he sees me
My skin has been touched, savored, wanted
The lust in his eyes that was only for me is fading
He notices the change in my Ying to his Yang
But he still loves me; even though my body was not his

You are my escape
My guilty love
My conflict in a life that is already predetermined
Forgive me father, for I have sinned
But I know, my body will betray me
And I'll come back to you again
"you are my sunshine, my only sunshine, you make me happy when skies are gray"

Author notes

It has helped me in many ways because sometimes i just want to get away from it all but sometimes you have to wait on love to find the struggle. because if you seek it. it will be more than what you can handle. my secrets

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  • SecretPsychology
    June 7
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    Did not follow the rules. Disqualified.


  • Fire-Fly
    May 16

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    very sorry but I requested only poems which had not won anything previously, including HM's.

    But thanks anyway.


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    March 20, 2008

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    This is an interesting story with a variety of poetic styles in one verse. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 20, 2008

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    Can you please put the application in your entry, so I can judge your poem properly? Otherwise I wont be able to let you through. Thank you .


  • Ephiphany
    October 26, 2007
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    Great entry, WOW...I am very impressed as I always am with your work I've read.


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  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    October 26, 2007

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    shit! this is some betrayal and yours truly love it! i love it i want to wish you good luck in my contest thanks for joining my contest i mean you described everything so darn well ooh the skeltons of secrets

    juju

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