I want to soar on the wings of the Eagle
See the world through his eyes
I want to howl at the moon with the wolf
Listening to the sounds of the night cries
I want to swim in the ocean like the whale
Hear the song of the others calling
I want to glide on the air like a butterfly
Softly spreading its colors to fly
I want to feel the air as it caresses me
To have the world below and the sky above
I want to run free in the forest at dusk
As the day takes a rest and the night wakes
I want to feel the rain as it showers the earth
As it cleans the air and waters the flowers
I want all of this and so much more
Most of all I just want to feel something
I want my heart and soul to be moved
I want to feel love and be loved in return
I want to soar like the eagle in the sky
Upon wings of my own above the things that make me cry
Lend me your wings sweet eagle
Let me take flight leaving all things below
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I can feel your desire to be free...you greatly express that wanting to be free and loved. I pray that you find what you're looking for.
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Although many of the words and phrases here are overused, the flow and effortlessness of this seem to compensate it. The message is uplifting that actually makes the reader feel like soaring. Good luck.
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now you have me wanting to feel all of these things as well. thank you for sharing this well written poem with me tonight. viyanna rosemarie
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What passion!!
You are in a very rich vein of poetry at the moment, cannot fault it at all, you seem to need REAl love and affection, and with this write you would attract it...ian.
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this is a great piece, love the wording of it, it feels very compact, and the imagery is really clear, you did an excellent job putting this together you should be proud of yourself. keep up the good work.
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A notable achievment that soars like its desires. So compact and complete. A thought though - Hear the song of my brothers calls, is not quite right, a little editing I think. Thanks for sharing something that uplifts instead of depressing.
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You relied heavily on cliche images and phrases ( "howl at the moon with the wolf", "soear on the wings of the eagle", "feel the air as it caresses", "feel the rain", "run free", "see the world", "I want all of this and so much more", "I just want to feel something", etc. etc.) to express a completely unoriginal concept. Try to stay away from overused, common, weak words and phrases like those.
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amazing
This poem, was amazing. I had to read it twice. Everything flowed so smooth and rhythmic. Thank you for featuring this so I had a chance to read it.
Much love,
Koneko
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such amazing imagery with this piece. I felt like I was soaring of the wings of that eagle
Very well done with this beautifully penned piece
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This was so sweetly written from a heart so tender .
I want all of this and so much more
Most of all I just want to feel something
I want my heart and soul to be moved
I want to feel love and be loved in return
I want to soar like the eagle in the sky
Upon wings of my own above the things that make me cry
Lend me your wings sweet eagle
Let me take flight leaving all things below
beautiful my dear!
~Lisa~
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My mind just soared like that eagle with your lovely words here. This is beautiful and it was filled with wonderful images. Being at one with nature and soaring high above all to take in the breathtaking scenery. You moved my heart with this and it flowed as soft as a butterfly. Thank you for this read, I really enjoyed. ♥ seamaiden
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when i was kid, how i desired to soar as the eagle and other fying birds, thoughtit would be delightful to soar and soar so high above the ground, seeing far and near. thanks for sharing.
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Hugs
Hey - you are good - you just keep cranking them out - can hardly keep up - but don't stop my dear - do want to see a victory poem one day though - filled with fulfilled dreams and happiness - you are a great writer Maggie - keep on keeping on - Bless God - Joe
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Well If Black Crow doesn't then I sure will!...I can just see your beautiful face above Mother Earth yet below the great Star Nation...sighs...Upon those wings one day you shall fly*hug*
Thank you so much for sharing that beautiful heart with me*rose*
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Damn! Im going to send you that eagle right now~
This is just beautiful Little Wounded Heart...your words begging to be free and to feel again...You will!
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