if i could give you the world i would
but would it do any good?
you brighten up my day
but do i make your troubles go away?
if you cheated i'd cry
but would you care?
if i was ran over by a car
would you be there?
if we are not together
would you still be my friend?
if another lad hit me
would you let me cry?
or tell the lad what for!?!?!
if i fell in love with your best friend
but he was cheating on me, would you tell me even though i'd be hurt?
if i was lonely
would you comfort me?
if a lad hurt me
would you be there for me?
if a lad broken my heart
would you help me pick up the pieces even though neither of us know where to start?...
what did you think???
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v,.good
this one is better than the other one i read, although i still like them both, grammer has been cleaned up in this a lot, spotted one mistake though hun on line 18 "confort" was probably meant to be "comfort" well done hun good write, keep on writting and peace out -freedom of soul-
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