A place of sanctuary and tranquility, I sit
at peace with the onix and pearls before me
my hands gracefully dance up and down
my spirit rises as the notes echo the room
head hangs low to this masterpiece I play
this peaceful sound flows from my hands
hypnotized by this immortal sound
untouched and pure is this piece
Forever living in this pianos keys
A contest entry
- Moonlight Sonata by Exodus.
300 points, ended November 12, 2007, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I think you could do with removing 'this' from one or two of the lines. It is a bit repetitive through out the piece. That said this had a lovely feel to it.
Thank you
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