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Without Your Poison

So many words of betrayal surround me
From the lips of all the unknown
They are so thick that I can barely see
How you have been left totally alone

I want there to be no more of your pain
Even though that is not a reality
Why should us angels fall again
When death is better than the life we can lead

I知 broken without your poison
I知 nothing without your touch
I知 dead inside without your poison
I知 empty I need you so much

The images we captured forever
Are beginning to fade away completely
Without torture will we be better
For the horror destroys us sweetly

I know you need me but I知 forgotten
All in this hell and the next
Can稚 made me so downtrodden
That my heart stops inside my breast

I知 broken without your poison
I知 nothing without your touch
I知 dead inside without your poison
I知 empty I need you so much

Everything will try but nothing will succeed
For strength was lost long ago
Freedom from hatred is more than we need
Just sanctuary I place no one will know

I知 broken without your poison
I知 nothing without your touch
I知 dead inside without your poison
I知 empty I need you so much

I知 broken and I always will be
Without your poison
I知 nothing and I always will be
Without your poison
I知 dead inside and I always will be
Without your poison
I知 empty I need you so much

Author notes

I miss you so much Pete
I would give anything to see you
xxx

Lady Nightshade

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  • Alex Hex
    May 1, 2008

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    wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow !! really nice poem , among my thousand entries , i did like this very much ! i could relate to it !

    thank you so much for entering and best of luck in the contest ,

    your friend and host ,
    alex hex


  • Blooming Poet
    January 9, 2008
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    This kinda seems condricting to me, its good, but it confused me a little. no offence


  • SixStringDebauchery
    December 5, 2007
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    I miss you to.
    I love you.
    xxx


  • incondite
    December 3, 2007
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    Read the rules. Name in author notes. This is about your favorite...what?


  • Keith
    December 1, 2007

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    Well, admittedly poison is a difficult word to find a rhyme for. But not impossible:
    I read a page of Boys' Own
    Then drank a draught of poison

    Sorry, that's the best I can do. I'm weeping incontinently.


  • Edna Sweetlove
    November 30, 2007

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    I got bored after a couple of lines and I was totally finished off by the brilliant concept of rhyming "poison" with (wait for it) "poison". Bravo.


  • PureRomance
    November 20, 2007

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    This is a beautiful lyric. I love it. Awesome job with this my fellow poet friend. God bless you in all that you do and in all that you write. If it is not asking too much, could you be so kind as to add me as a fav so that I may have the blessing of reading more from you while my contest progresses? God bless you in all that you do and write, and good luck to you and your poem in this contest. You did a marvelous job with this.


  • only1love4ever
    November 7, 2007

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    Very good and thank you so much for entering. You write very very well. This is very sad. I am so sorry! Bust best of luck to you!!

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