Her sensuous frame swallowed in blackened lace
Milky flesh parting through the folds of water
She offers a chance
With coy eyes she glances up
With pristine flecks of powdered darkness
Luminous eyes of blue beg for acceptance
Her breath causing the curve of her attributes
To rise
Straining against her constricting corset
Appealing to the senses
“Please
Take this…”
Her body moving languidly
In motion with the lake at her back
Her fragrant heavy serpentine locks
Wrapping seductively around her silhouette
And with her demon shaded lips sculpted
Becomingly in a frozen smile
She whispers knowingly
“Accept this chance…...”
With a motion to her bounty
“Not to die alone…”
Author notes
http://kreestal.deviantart.com/art/Nightfall-19287522
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A contest entry
- Pic Inspirations! I need 2 more entries so please enter!!♥ by perfectsunset.
475 points, ended November 22, 2007, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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mmmmmmmmm
Where is this lake again? I love your imagery, she is frozen in my minds eye. Thank you
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Firstly congrats on the silver. I like the discription in this, it's just so well put. I felt as if I wasn't reading at all, but watching a movie through your beautifully constructed words. The flow in this was just as amazing. Great poem, I enjoyed reading this alot.
Silvos.
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wow wish i could write this well...might have to get lessons me thinks...i love the way you describe the picture in an interesting way giving it a life of its own...i was very impressed by this one...i wonder where the picture came from and whether it had relevance to the arthurian legend...oh well wondering is like wandering you never get to the point you wish to be at...
keep writing such brilliant poetry
kelbornro
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So the interesting thing to this poem is that where i live we actually have a Lady of the lake... She was killed and wrapped in a carpet and dumped into our local lake that is incredibly deep and extremely cold and because of those conditions she floated to the surface after awhile because her body turned to a soap like condition!!!! She was just floating across the lake and was found by fishermen... There are all kinds of scary stories and poems about her... So this was interesting to read... I really enjoyed it.
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haahaa! Wow.. how morbidly interesting!
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Gahhhh, this was gorgeous!!! Absolutely gorgeous! I'm so glad I gave you this pic cause you sure owned it! Buahhaa. The imagery, well you know the imagery was amazing. Your vocabulary; stunning as always. And the whole idea; beautiful. Love love these lines
"Her sensuous frame swallowed in blackened lace
Milky flesh parting through the folds of water
She offers a chance"
I love black lace!! This could even be considered a dark dirty pretty, for reall homie. Thanks for entering and best of luckers [not like u need it] lol -
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bwahahaha! ::coughs and hacks:: blah.. gah.. obviously.. something was in my throat...
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