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Alone

Child to be
No father for thee
Lost in an ocean of fear

I am an island
Alone
Trapped

In the middle of the sea
No atoll to comfort me
It's all becomming clear

I am an island
Alone
Trapped

Child to be
Stranded in the sea
We are the only ones here

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  • Teenie Woo
    December 26, 2007

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    Awesome

    I loved this one. It's short, but means so much. It has alot of feeling in it. And I want you to know, you're never alone, you always have X-Tine.
    XoXo


  • esroddo silver member
    November 15, 2007

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    I could feel your words

    Wonderful write love the rhyme thank you for entering and good luck LISA


  • Saree Wynter
    November 11, 2007
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    ... Are you preggy??? Good poem.