It Seems Darren Still Loves Her

The picture of her, in the back
of his wallet, is a thorn in eye.

Cell phone haunts with
static hums. Each overseas ring
reminds him it's just the new girl.

He knows now
Dina won't call again, cannot
understand why she's sour

four and a half

years later.

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By me, right now

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tara wilson
January 15

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ooohh..ouch. i like this one. Yes, it seems like he still does.
I like the title, because it makes me think does this man know how to love???
- J.J. Sass
  January 15
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  he still does... painfully so... now a couple months shy of 6 yrs later... i feel sorry for him sometimes, but only sometimes. generally, i think he's just obsessed
NurseChilly
November 2, 2007

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gosh girl, you got this one nailed tight... such raw imagery and strength...

well done ...

G.x
- J.J. Sass
  November 2, 2007
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  Thanks G.
Jersene
October 27, 2007
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oh, yes...they say time makes you forget, but sometimes, I'm not so sure. Lovely penning!
naked roots
October 26, 2007
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ahhh...yes.
Another excellent one.
- J.J. Sass
  October 26, 2007
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  pain breeds excellence.. at least in the world of poetry lol
DolphinLass
October 26, 2007
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well done good luck
- J.J. Sass
  October 26, 2007
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  Thank you.
Peteskid
October 26, 2007

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Seems that memories have at least two sides... so very intriguing, a very dramatic contrast and many interesting thoughts rise up here...wonderful...PK
- J.J. Sass
  October 26, 2007
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  Thanks PK.