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What I Use To Be

And that look in your eyes say everything,
The glitterless look tells a thousand lies.
I can read you like a book baby doll,
Each kiss represents a part of me that dies.

That killer smile screams for attention,
It's the perfect way for you to feel.
The touch of his hands on bare skin,
Nails dig in just to know your still real.

Those teeth marks are a cry for help,
You need to feel something other than this.
A little love, A little hope, A little faith,
Numbing your body with one final addictive kiss.

The scars that lace your wrists aren't healing,
And you know you need to get control.
Hold on tight and fight for your life sweetheart,
We all have broken hearts, there not whole.

One person can take you out of this,
And save you from destroying your health.
And only one person can make you believe this,
And stop you from ruining yourself.

Author notes

I realized the other day, if I hadn't broken up with my ex, and started talking to my best friend, i'd more than likely be dead or in jail.
So i'm thanking him, cause he's the one person who's helped me so much, and understood me.
He's made me such a better person, and I can't thank him enough.

Thanks Tommy. ♥

First Proper Write After MONTHS Of Writers Block

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  • xShatteredWithoutUx
    November 9, 2007
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    I like it. It's really good. My favorite parts are:
    That killer smile screams for attention,
    It's the perfect way for you to feel.
    The touch of his hands on bare skin,
    Nails dig in just to know your still real

    &&&&
    The scars that lace your wrists aren't healing,
    And you know you need to get control.


    You're awesome.


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    October 27, 2007
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    Great to see your back!
    Gorgeous write darling.
    xx


  • autumns rising
    October 26, 2007
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    Wow, great to see you back Caz. this is wonderful your tribute is so real.
    ily♥