You show me undying love
Love sent from above
Something I've never felt before
It is you that I just adore
You steal my heart
I never want to see us apart
I've waited all my life to hold you
And show you this love we have is true
You make me so happy and full of life
This happiness keeps me smiling so bright
I hope you understand
Love is not what i demand
It's just something we can share
And always show we care
A contest entry
- No Perfection by xTomorrowx.
500 points, ended June 6, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Romance of the Heart by Liquid memories.
525 points, ended November 26, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Thoughts in my head. Just tell me what you think. Be Honest People!
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great poem...like the last three lines alot: "Love is not what i demand It's just something we can share
And always show we care"... goodluck
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az long lasting love. well done. success in the contest.
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Great work on this, written purely for yourself, not to make others happy it seems...
Rhyme great, story great, I love it =)
Thanks for entering and good luck! =) -
Beautiful
You truly show the goodness you carry from within and I love the warmness of your work
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this was great. Defiantly what I feel for my guy. THis was very good. I love the last four lines they were great. Keep up the good work.
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