I would surrender
but
to who.
I would beg but my lips are frozen
with indifference caused by silence.
I would cry but my eyes have
been blinded by those around me.
I would love you
but you broke the only
thing I had left to give.
My heart.
Please tell me what you think
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aw this is sad
but its a great write its short but it says alot! thanks for sharing!
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how very sad.
you have portrayed your emotions vividly, well written.
ang -
I can so relate to this one right now in my life! More than you would believe! I just hope your pain is not as deep. Such a powerfully emotional poem! Great write!
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You sure say a lot with a very few carefully chosen and well used words, ma'am. A lot said, and a lot felt from them. I might ask about ... and still might.
Paul
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Deep and very filled with emotion sigh, one can't help but feel as they read this one,
Thanks for sharing this,
big hugz across the miles
Frozentearz
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my lips are frozen...
You have such a wonderful grasp of the language my talented friend! You can take a few words of sadness and meld them together into a thing of beauty... Great work!
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i know these feelings all too well...nice poem
i hope things are alright
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"I would surrender
but
to who."
These lines resonate within me right now - I relate to this poem so much
Excellent poem
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