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Antisana

My atmospheric artificial wishes

became atonement to light his path.

A candle gave birth to autonomous

Law and Order crowds

so sad their red hearts avoided its glow.

He appeased the aggregate with a new apparatus

and gave them grievous green martinis instead.

Some aversive soul apportioned olive pits

and blamed the Antisana.

Author notes

Antisana: a volcano of N central Equador in the Andes

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  • Annalise
    November 7, 2007
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    LOL I just read the other comment. There are some big words in here.

    Nice poem.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    October 26, 2007
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    Wow some big words in this one great work