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sink in skin

sublime serenity

    steeps softly in my soul



sink in skin



A contest entry

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 26, 2007
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    So subtly superb, thanks for this submission into my contestlol


  • Jarrod
    October 26, 2007
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    cute and creative.... nice job indeed


  • Miss Faith
    October 26, 2007
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    beautiful...and simple...


    • landmark
      October 26, 2007
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      thank you! i usually write longer poems, but this was for a contest and it had to be 10 words exactly with alliteration, so it was kind of a fun challenge for me. :-)


  • Restless and True
    October 25, 2007
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    Although that was only three lines.

    They were killer.

    ~Restless and True~


    • landmark
      October 25, 2007

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      thank you! it was a quickie for a contest... i usually don't do those but i really liked the prompt. :-)

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