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alice stories

fall like alice
in a land of wonders
no floor to catch you
or parachute to pull
no boat for your landing
or a high up stool
you are there on your own
falling faster and faster
tumbling in mid air
screaming nothing of laughter
and all your memories
leading to this point
just fall into your soul
your heart and every joint
they mark your personality
describe all that there is
you are falling faster and faster
just like a failing quiz
your depths are getting deaper
the things they are no cheaper
you are falling down a stair well
a building side or hill
there is no re-wind or pause buttons
nothing will stand still
until you find that floor
that ground that you are over
until you release that hell
you will become slower and slower
and there the ladder sits
for you ofcourse to climb
like once again you did
from time to time to time

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  • Joy.To.The.World
    September 14, 2008

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    this is really really good mary youare a great writer. i love how you used a movie like alice in wonderland


  • EmmaDilemma93
    October 26, 2007
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    wow amazing mary ur gonna go somewhere.. ur poetry is sooo great


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    October 25, 2007

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    wow love this one alice in wonder land was a childhood favorite of mine. Great poem keep up the good writes this one was awesome