days direct diversion's
dire delusions,
passages play perdition's
patient peril.
Author notes
I swore I'd never do another quickie...another oath broken.
A contest entry
- Alliteration Quickie by 2lullabyhaven.
425 points, ended October 26, 2007, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
has anybody seen my muse?
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An enjoyable piece of poetry, live inside the night I say if the day is being tricky with you, a good poem.
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HA!! You are good at this!
Of course you can't resist doing these quickies because you can create, doing what you do! 
A really cool poem, totally. Love the alliteration. 
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Nice quick one..awesome alliteration always
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Awe sweetie...it's ok.
This is great and your words always ring truth even if it is a quickie...
Becky
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You shouldn't swear off these quickies you are so very good at them...Congrats on the Trophy...You always seem to put such meaning in your words! Thanks for sharing with me
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Congratulations
I am so glad to see a shiny bauble on this piece. Excellent work. ~Pamela
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Excellent quickie you penned with hard core truth...feeling as if you have been sneaking a peek into my life lately...So glad to be back online and able to enjoy your talent once again...
Congrat's on Silver babe...
~Cheryl~
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Congratulations
SILVER YAY!! -
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thanks
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I am so sorry, you broke yet another oath, but- hahaha I am so happy for your superb submission, and I thank you for it lol
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Great use of a lot of alliteration! This was a good write for the contest.
Thanks for your comments and advice
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Excellent!! Wonderful use of alliteration...this is simply wonderful!
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You are so great at alliteration - and these aren't so bad every once in a while A great quickie
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Even your quickie is quite pleasing and full of alliteration.
All the best in the contest
Blessings~
~Joy
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of course this is awesome. It is oh so you! LOVED this. ~Pamela
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