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Gone

I'm worrried
You've changed
The friend I've loved is gone
You're distant
And angry
It's like your soul is gone
You're fighting
And drinking
Your purity is gone
I miss 
And love you
Why must you be gone

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  • FreeFalling911
    October 26, 2007

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    thank you for entering my contest ... this poem was really good... i think you could add more to it... but good start