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Blank

Blank white sheet of paper
A blank mind.
Where does the inspiration come from
Inspiration to transform these two into something majestic and wonderful
for all of time to come,
something more.

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  • Puking Faerie Dust gold member
    October 25, 2007
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    I liked this.

    Oh, writer's block. Always barging in when you least expect it and ruining your imagination. I've been there quite a lot, and still am.

    The third line is way too long. Either shorten it, or break it in half. It would flow a lot better.
    Jeanette*~