Attention averted
to adoration of
your admirable beauty.
Staring from a distance,
stretching to reach,
but short of touch.
Delightful daydreams
flashing plays of
you and I together.
The id acts a tyrant,
desires taking over
important conscious thoughts.
Neural connections aware
that you and I are like
the sun and the moon; our
love could never be.
Despite this, delicious
thoughts drift to your
face and I smile because
in my mind you are mine.
Author notes
PROMPT:
"although I may not hold you in my arms, you are cradled in the arms of my thoughts"
Cascadingsakura
When I entered options were optional...
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie by Laura Lamarca.
300 points, ended October 25, 2007, 5 entries
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super and ya its okay i really like this one! Despite this, delicious
thoughts drift to your
face and I smile because
in my mind you are mine" totally my favorite line!
Goodluck
~dawn♥ -
L11 there's a typo.
Thank you for entering and good luck in the judging. La x
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