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Buried

Frozen moments six feet under
Blood dried to icicles
Eyes sunk deeper in the skeleton
Laying on the wooden bed
With falsified smile plastered
For a perfect Kodak picture

Painted bloody rosy lips
Running mascara from shut eyes
Tear drops sparkling frozen on the cheeks
Laying down gently on cold screwed casket
Deep under ground for demons
To chew on the warm mummified flesh

The mourning laughter surrounds
The violins of hell are playing loud
While the hell blazing fire furnace beneath
Roasting slowly the alive dead body
Smothering with oozing blood
For zestful platter for the world
To watch it decaying into oblivion

Yelling creams deafening ear drums
Dead to the world living underworld
Standing in the middle of furnace of hell
Pouring ice cubes on melting skin
While the demons stand applauding
With echoes all around

No way out, doors shut bolted
Banging behind closed doors
Each layer on body carefully being peeled
The emotions are bruised
Feelings are ripped into millions of pieces
While I see familiar faces surrounding me
Laughing mocking at my helplessness
Pinning me down on my knees

Broken vocal chords
Screamed the silent words
That came back slapping
Right back at my reddened face
While faceless scared faces
Bend on licking on bleeding wounds
Drinking the victorious wine
Made to perfection burying me deep down

The lights are dim
Air free closed casket is open
To inhale stale breeze stroking my melting skin
Escaping odor from decaying body
Is painting a masterpiece
A perfect picture to be hung on the falling walls
While the life goes on as always
Another fine day bringing stale morning dews
After long freezing blazing moonlight
Completing the life cycle
Spinning the time to another strike
As I lay stun inside frozen
Gently laid upon the wooden casket
Risen from the under ground
For satisfying hungry appetite
To eat roasted peels of flesh of mine
While courts guarded the fort around demons…

While I’m buried deep down under
Laid gently frozen on the bolted casket
With holes pushing stale breeze
Filling the gaps around my body
Left to slowly decay
Bit by bit, every single day…

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Just twisted thoughts from my twisted brain cells

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  • jcat gold member
    November 29, 2007

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    Very dark and incredibly disturbing!!! And I LOVED it!! Very well done and the imagery made the hair on my neck stand on end!!!!


    • imperfectperfection
      November 29, 2007
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      Thanks jcat

      Thanks hun for taking time to read and actually leave such a lovely comment.. I appreciate your support and time... take care Minoo


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    October 27, 2007

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    A dark and disturbing journey through your mind. Wonderful and twisted. The imagery just outstanding in this. I loved the darkness and the emotion behind this.

    Well done
    All the best
    Wayne
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