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Imperfections are perfection

V1:
When I wake up in the morning
I wish I could see your body lying next to me
And listen to the beating of our hearts
Beat like we were meant to be

V2:
I wish you would look at me and smile
SO you should watch me as I melt away
And hold my hand and kiss me
Just like you do with her everyday

Pre Chorus:
I like all the imperfect things about you
Even the stupid things you tend to do

Chorus:
Oh, I keep dreaming this dream
That some other girl is living
And it's not fair
But I know nothing is ever fair

And oh, I can't believe that
I missed my chance
How could I kiss that chance
There must be something wrong with me

V3:
I hate the way you talk about her
Like she's something too amazing for words
[She's not that pretty anyway]

V4:
How you always say
She's the only girl for you
[God what and I supposed to say]

V5:
She makes you smile
Makes you feel worth while
[But it's my time I have to pay]

Pre Chorus:
I like all the imperfect things about you
Even the stupid things you tend to do

Chorus:
Oh, I keep dreaming this dream
That some other girl is living
And it's not fair
But I know nothing is ever fair

And oh, I can't believe that
I missed my chance
How could I kiss that chance
There must be something wrong with me

Pre Chorus:
I like all the imperfect things about you
Even the stupid things you tend to do

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Comments

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  • Little Miss Suicide
    December 28, 2007
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    i luuurve it

    fucking amazing
    omfg
    i like the pre-chorus
    its fantastic


  • xXbroken lullabyXx
    November 20, 2007
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    i like it, it's cute in a sad-ish way..anyways hope things will turn out better


  • Ixtapa
    October 27, 2007

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    kaytee
    you never cease to amaze me
    i so suck compared to you
    damn you
    but i still love you
    and i miss you
    saM~x


  • black thought
    October 26, 2007
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    iiM F33LiiN TH3S3 SOO MUCH ii LUV TH3 PR3 CHORUS
    " I like all the in perfect things about you
    Even the stupid things you tend to do."
    DATS HOW ii F33L ABOUT MY BOO BUT iiT UP ii DiiG iiT
    U CAN CH3CK Mii OUT SOM3TiiM3 iiF U WANT
    STAY UP && STAY BL3SS3D
    x_*DU3C3[[z]]*_x

    [[BLACK THOUGHT]]


  • Pain Equals Life
    October 26, 2007
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    I love this, it's great. I wish I could hear the music along with it :]


  • disenchanted-vampire
    October 26, 2007
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    This is really good, it'll make a great song. What kind of music genre did you write it for?


  • PoeticFlame
    October 26, 2007

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    this is a good song and I bet the guitar to it would be really awesome. Just a few chords and you've got a hit lol.


  • TheFalseReality
    October 25, 2007

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    Great!

    Awesome song! I like it a lot! I play guitar and it would be cool to but a tune on it! Some day, I want to write a song too!


  • Androgyneric
    October 25, 2007
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    Wow...I REALLY like this...please do let me know how this sounds in a song...this is amazing

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