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this is not a love poem

 
 
 
 
 
she has little
feet & the rest
follows that trend:
not much canvas
to spare,
so it is carefully
hoarded-

needles flash,
knitting stories
onto flesh,

each one a poem,
waiting for fingers
to dip
beneath its ink,

 

to settle under

skin.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

  

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Option 2: Skin Deep

Really! It isn't .... much

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  • Naridill gold member
    November 3, 2007
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    Each word tastes as beautiful as the next and together it stains the page. This is awesome, typical of you, even though this is anon. I love the imagery that you can produce through such little wording. I just love it all...

    Thanks for entering and much luck ~~~!

  • Rowan gold member
    October 26, 2007
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    and this one does get under skin~ nicely done.


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    October 25, 2007

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    I really like this title- i heard somthing simillar somewere. But anyway, this is again another magical peice.
    I really envy your talent.
    xx
    ♥


  • Zayra
    October 25, 2007

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    there is a song somewhere....

    "this is not a love song" and I love it!

    "f

  • Yvette Champ
    October 25, 2007
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    Title,content and intent all superb.Bravo.


  • kjack
    October 25, 2007

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    Wow, just Wow!!!! This was breathtaking---literally!!! I honestly don't know what to say. I could feel picture it perfectly in my mind. I absolutely loved this one. The imagery was superb!!!!

    becca


  • Suzanne Dia gold member
    October 25, 2007

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    LOL the title

    this is a beautimous take on tats
    oh, and on your muse too


  • Grunts Girl
    October 25, 2007
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    knitting stories
    into flesh

    that was marvelous

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