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She..

Missing image

You inscribed timeless ripples in my soul
like static footprints on a thousand weather less moons…

Captioned my essence so I’m forever
without loss, loss of that dimly lit glow
felt but never seen…

Forever, constantly blessed with it,
I bathe in it to attain that spiritual high,
such like a summoning from sacred queens
blessing the tides that caress the mother Nile
and blow life to earth’s veins streaming
with golden, molten fire of life

Mysterious like a thousand secrets
in a thousand worlds, I’m inclined
to lay on a bed of black sand
meditating to the whispers of
the northern and aurora lights
praying, wishing to discover you
hoping that I can uncover you,

paint your skin colours of the stars never seen

I feather you, caress you with these

fingers like affection’s paint brushes,

I stroke shade never seen, exotic mixtures of love and pain

Lust and passion so you quiver and shudder

As you try to cage this desire,

not wanting to let it go

Yet making me find mine…


Your name?

I heard it comes from a symphony of the celestial winds
absorbed by my heart whilst they flow between
ancient secrets of ancient cosmic belts presently
no more, yet shown to me whilst i fight and survive
at the last grains of spiritual sands, waiting for karma
to reincarnate..

making sure your name is forever more.

Blessed by the blessed, I let my spirit

wonder in search of yours
Just to catch a glimpse of your mystical essence.

Yet I’m always feeling your presence,  
As you inscribe timeless ripples in my soul
Like static footprints on a thousand, weather less moons,
Captioning my essence so I’m forever
without loss...

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painting by K. Xavier Bond.

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  • Neo.Love.Soul
    March 10

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    Whoa, you are like the real deal, man. I've never read anything so eloquently written before in my life. That was crazy. I got goosebumps reading this. Tell me you have something published I can buy. Whoa...

  • shellybabz
    July 2, 2008

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    This is my favourite outt of all of themm... Well the wayy i understand it is how i understnd the song annonymous y bobby valentino,,,.. this girrl is anonymous..
    "praying, wishing to discover you
    hoping that I can uncover you," that line gott me..damnnnn caus coming to think about it,,to discover something you have to uncover it,, well here it cud be uncover all this persons secrets,hurt,pain.. But it cud also be sexual cause it has a romantic flow to it,like a desperate kinda flow "paint your skin colours of the stars never seen,I feather you, caress you with these fingers like affection’s paint brushes,"

    again u create a visual image,,i love how u do that
    "I heard it comes from a symphony of the celestial winds"
    "blessing the tides that caress the mother Nile"
    I love the way you wrote "your name".. and then went on to write about where it came from!!

    My favourite one here,,its amazing!!!


  • MahoganyFlow
    October 31, 2007

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    I am blessed to have so many great poets surrounded within my circle. This was absolutely beautiful...

    "Your name?
    I heard it comes from a symphony of the celestial winds
    absorbed by my heart whilst they flow between..."

    That line was a killer like so many others I've read in this. Thanks for the comments on my poem and adding me as a fav. Will do the same!


  • Kooler-Den-Ice
    October 28, 2007
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    it goez w/o sayin

    impressive...damn...off da....i don even kno....


  • cgirl0410
    October 28, 2007

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    THE KING IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!

    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is why you are my favorite poet and inspiration. Words and sentiments and emotions like this. Reading this piece makes me want to just create a masterpiece, man. There are no words to describe the talent and the depths that you reach with your words. I'M SPEECHLESS! AND WE MISSED YOU TOO! I know I did. I'm so excited about this piece, oh my goodness. THIS WAS CRAZY!!!!!! Keep doing your thing, Mr. Oh-so-talented!!!! Keep doing your thing! Later. - cgirl0410(you know the name)

  • Black Swan Rose
    October 25, 2007

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    this piece is...it is unbelievably beautiful..How I felt my skin quiver as I read this piece of yours...such lovely words here...I find that I cannot say enough about it...

    much love to you.


    J


    • Blac-sol silver member
      October 26, 2007
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      hey thank yu for taking out time to read the piece and i'm glad yu like it..

      much luv to yu 2..

      sol.

  • New-n-Improved
    October 25, 2007

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    This Is Tight

    Like the poem and the style. This is raw talent and real poetry. I hope to read more just like this. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

    • Blac-sol silver member
      October 26, 2007
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      thanks man.. preciate that, been a while since i was here n alot of ppl i knew aint here nomo yet yu still writin and postin, yu shud be published by now i hope

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