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~Perturbatio~

Passion ponders
painful predicament

of paean plaudits

plagiarising purity's promise




A contest entry

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  • Celticmoon
    April 5, 2008

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    I admit I am a sucker for good alliterations
    and this one is chalk full of them.
    I am impressed with this piece.
    Thank you for entering!
    Best of luck to you!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • Ryno
    November 26, 2007

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    Wow that alliteration was really well penned... pondering the poem, pointing out twas plausible and proud ...umm I mean it still made lots of sense Thanks for the entry.

  • Gott ist tot
    October 29, 2007
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    Great use of alliteration, congrats on the gold


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    October 26, 2007

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    Congrats on your Gold


  • 2lullabyhaven
    October 26, 2007
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    Elegant, thanks for this fine entry into my contestlol


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    October 25, 2007
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    NICE! well done. I liked this a great deal. ~Pam


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    October 25, 2007
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    This is clever and so very well done. The message here is deep and I had to pull out the dictionary...thank you for teaching me some new words Good luck in the contest. Laura x

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