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my tears

do my tears make me beautiful
do they give me sex appeal
do they make you happy
show you how I feel

these tears that are falling
do they give you joy
make you smile in satisfaction
at this heart you've destroyed

do they make you feel empowered
make you happy to be alive
does it turn you on
seeing the tears I cry

do you make me cry
because you can
these tears I cry
every day every hour
do they curb your desire

do you enjoy these tears
do they make you feel strong
if you were a real man
you'd think this was all wrong

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I dunno what to say just a thought thats been lingering

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  • TwiztidMaggot
    January 1, 2008

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    This is a pretty good piece. I really like it. Keep up your amazing work! it made me think. it kept my attention! it hit my heart! keep it up!

    Crimson